I am a Year 5 student at Panmure Bridge School, Auckland, New Zealand. My teachers are Mr Wong and Mr Ogilvie.
Friday, March 15, 2019
Kiwi Poem
Mrs Cockeram couldn’t find any kiwi poems so we had to make our own. The tools we used were our writing books and Ipads. We learnt this skill from Mrs Cockeram she taught us step by step. We also did this to learn about the kiwi.
I love your acrostic poem on the kiwi. You are an amazing writer and artist. It's awesome to see how you are using the iPad to extend your learning. Keep up the great work.
wow Riley so you said wings are so short you love kiwis so much and kiwis are so cute and fluffy i love kiwis to and i think that kiwis are so fluffy too good work Riley and nice try.
hey Riley i love you'r blog so much its because you my little brother so i love you and your kiwi poem i think kiwis are so cute and fluffy by the way good gob and keep up the good work bye
I really like your poem Riley as well as your comments from your brother. Keep up the good work buddy and I look forward to hearing all about your learning this year.
Hi Riley
ReplyDeleteI love your acrostic poem on the kiwi. You are an amazing writer and artist. It's awesome to see how you are using the iPad to extend your learning. Keep up the great work.
Mrs Millward
wow Riley so you said wings are so short you love kiwis so much and kiwis are so cute and fluffy i love kiwis to and i think that kiwis are so fluffy too good work Riley and nice try.
ReplyDeletehey Riley i love you'r blog so much its because you my little brother so i love you and your kiwi poem i think kiwis are so cute and fluffy by the way good gob and keep up the good work bye
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem Riley as well as your comments from your brother. Keep up the good work buddy and I look forward to hearing all about your learning this year.
ReplyDeleteHi Riley I like your poem. I kind of like kiwis but I don't know why they come out at night?
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