I’m Daniel from the SLJ Blog commenting team. I’m looking forward to seeing all your amazing blog posts and I hope you’re enjoying your summer too.
Good Job one your comment on Jessie’s blog. It was short but you were positive and encouraging and you were specific about saying their voice was nice and clear. This is great to help the person feel good about their work and know what they are already doing well.
But it’s also really important to go a bit deeper in that “Helpful” part a bit more too. Maybe suggesting they could also try something different or new to make their work even better.
When we do this in a kind, caring way it helps them learn and improve. It takes a bit of practice which I’m still learning to do as I’m commenting on your blogs too but it’s worth it to help others improve.
Great start Riley, looking forward to seeing more activities from you soon. See you later in the comments.
Hey Riley,
ReplyDeleteI’m Daniel from the SLJ Blog commenting team. I’m looking forward to seeing all your amazing blog posts and I hope you’re enjoying your summer too.
Good Job one your comment on Jessie’s blog. It was short but you were positive and encouraging and you were specific about saying their voice was nice and clear. This is great to help the person feel good about their work and know what they are already doing well.
But it’s also really important to go a bit deeper in that “Helpful” part a bit more too. Maybe suggesting they could also try something different or new to make their work even better.
When we do this in a kind, caring way it helps them learn and improve. It takes a bit of practice which I’m still learning to do as I’m commenting on your blogs too but it’s worth it to help others improve.
Great start Riley, looking forward to seeing more activities from you soon.
See you later in the comments.
Daniel
Thank you Daniel I'm shore I will add deeper word like great and nice Thank you for your feed forward and feed back.
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