I am a Year 5 student at Panmure Bridge School, Auckland, New Zealand. My teachers are Mr Wong and Mr Ogilvie.
Tuesday, December 15, 2020
SLJ Week 1 Activity 3
Today we did our SLJ task 3 worked with LS2 to complete our comic. We read a article about a man losing his false teeth and watched a video clip to help us write our comic. I liked to work with my brother.
Kia ora Riley, I really like your comic strip you have done. It is really interesting and this is a good writen comic strip. One question I have is what do you think about this activity.
What a good and fun start on your Summer Learning Journey. You have a good sense of humour with this activity. It is sometimes really fun and good to work with someone on these projects.
Tēnā koe Riley
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ben and I am a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey.
Good work with your comic strip. I can tell that you took time to observe the picture carefully and craft a story that fits well.
Your writing style is very impressive also. Are reading and writing subjects that you enjoy?
Keep up the good work!
Kind regards,
Benjamin
Thank you Benjamin for the feed back and yes my favourite subject is reading and writing.
DeleteKia ora Riley,
ReplyDeleteI really like your comic strip you have done. It is really interesting and this is a good writen comic strip. One question I have is what do you think about this activity.
Hi Riley
ReplyDeleteWhat a good and fun start on your Summer Learning Journey. You have a good sense of humour with this activity. It is sometimes really fun and good to work with someone on these projects.
Thank you Mr Johnston for the feed back I will be doing the SLJ all summer but some days I will not do SLJ.
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